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2013-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Angel

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Thinking Statement 1. No, I don't think so. Because their behavior was not crime. 2. Because horse dance is interesting for everyone and the rhythm is exciting.

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Hi there Jimmy You\'re really diligent. Keep your ideas coming in coz I like hearing a lot of fresh views and opinions from youngsters. Have a beautiful night ahead!! Just a tip: when starting a sentence with \"because\", make sure that you\'re writing complete sentences and not sentence fragments. Example: Because Jane woke up late. (is a sentence fragment) Because Jane woke up late, she had to postpone the fishing trip. (correct- with complete thought) See you in class tomorrow. Teacher Lexi Here are my corrections: Thinking Statement1. No, I don\'t think so. Because their behavior was not crime. >>No, I don\'t think so because their behavior was not a crime. >>No, I don\'t think that they should be punished because no crime was committed..2. Because horse dance is interesting for everyone and the rhythm is exciting. >>Correct :)  

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