The Ants and the Grasshopper.
학생이 쓴 원문
1. The Ants work so hard.But Grasshopper is enjoying by himself.
2. Ants prepare their winter life. 3. Winter had come.
4. Ants are ready their life,but Grasshopper was not ready.
5. He was bagging front of Ants house.6. Ants were very nice to treat to Grasshopper.
7. Our real life is same.8.If work not enough one day we get hungry.
8. We have to spend our daily life more wiser, and don’t waste time.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]nah :) You don\'t actually have to number your sentences because it should be in an essay manner. But t[이름]k you for answering this quickly!
We will discuss your sentences tomorrow ^^
- Teacher Debbie
1. The Ants work so hard.But Grasshopper is enjoying by himself.
>> The Ant works so hard while Grasshopper is just enjoying himself.
2. Ants prepare their winter life.
2. Ants prepare their winter life.
>> Ant is preparing for winter.
3. Winter had come.
>> Then the winter came...
4. Ants are ready their life,but Grasshopper was not ready.
4. Ants are ready their life,but Grasshopper was not ready.
>> The Ant is ready but Grasshopper isn\'t.
5. He was bagging front of Ants house.
5. He was bagging front of Ants house.
>> He was begging in front of Ant\'s house.
6. Ants were very nice to treat to Grasshopper.
>> Ant treated Grasshopper nicely.
7. Our real life is same.
7. Our real life is same.
>> It is the same in real life.
8.If work not enough one day we get hungry.
>> If we don\'t work hard, we will get hungry one day.
8. We have to spend our daily life more wiser, and don’t waste time.
8. We have to spend our daily life more wiser, and don’t waste time.
>> We have to spend our life wisely and not waste time.
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