The appearance and character of the person I want to date.
학생이 쓴 원문
Let me explain the appearance and character of the person I want to date. First is the appearance. I wish he was taller than me and I wish he didn\'t have double eyelids in his eyes. I want to be a good-natured and polite person. I hate people who treat adults with disrespect.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Let me explain the appearance and character of the person I want to date.
>>> CORRECT!
First is the appearance.
>>> The first on my list is appearance.
I wish he was taller than me and I wish he didn\'t have double eyelids in his eyes.
>>> I wish he is taller than me and doesn\'t have double eyelids.
I want to be a good-natured and polite person.
>>> I want a good-natured and polite person.
I hate people who treat adults with disrespect.
>>> CORRECT!
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