The appearance of the person who I want to date.
학생이 쓴 원문
The feature in appearance that I like most is having broad shoulders. I can feel manly from that feature so it makes me like it. Also, I like tall and bulky man. I hope he has low voice. That\'s all. I don\'t want anymore.
강사 첨삭
The feature in appearance that I like most is having broad shoulders.
>> The feature from a person\'s appearance that I like most is, having broad shoulders.
I can feel manly from that feature so it makes me like it.
>> I can feel the manliness from that feature, so that makes me like it.
Also, I like tall and bulky man. I hope he has low voice. That\'s all. I don\'t want anymore.
>>Also, I like tall and bulky men. I hope he has a low voice. That\'s all. I don\'t want anything anymore.
OR
>>Also, I would like a tall bulky man. I hope he has a low voice. That\'s all. I don\'t want anything anymore.
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