The Assignment

2017-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Mia

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ESSAY: Have You Ever Regretted Something? Please answer in complete sentences. ->I have one thing that regretted about not study hard when I was in high schoolstudent. If I had studied hard, I could have been to get a better Job like dentist or doctor. However, I am living to be faithful to my present life now.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for making your assignment.

Good job!

~~ Teacher Mia ~~

->I have one thing that regretted about not study hard when I was in high schoolstudent. If I had studied hard, I could have been to get a better Job like dentist or doctor. However, I am living to be faithful to my present life now.

>> If I have to regret something is that I did not study hard when I was a high school student. If I studied hard then I could have gotten a better job now like being a dentist or a doctor. However, I am living contentedly with my present life now.

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