the background of a movie
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, it is. After watching the movie, Sound of Music, I really wanted to go to the mansion in that movie. I want to actually step on the trails, the fields that come out of that movie.
강사 첨삭
Yes, it is.
>> CORRECT
After watching the movie, Sound of Music, I really wanted to go to the mansion in that movie.
>> After watching the movie The Sound of Music, I really wanted to visit the mansion in the film.
I want to actually step on the trails, the fields that come out of that movie.
>> I want to actually walk on the same trails and fields that appear in the movie.
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