The bad behavior is not good things.

I think bad behavior is easily breaks other people\'s happiness or for their own happiness. For example, be pickpocket, fraud, murder, ect. I think we\'re animals that coexist after all, and we\'re collective animals that can\'t do anything if there\'s only one person. It\'s not a good thing to sacrifice yourself for everyone, but I also think it\'s a problem for people who value others low for themselves.

Hi Da [이름],

I wanted to commend you on completing your homework and sharing your thoughts on the topic of bad behavior and its impact on happiness. You\'ve provided some insightful examples and expressed your perspective clearly. I appreciate your effort in exploring the concept of coexistence and the importance of valuing others. If you have any questions or would like to discuss your essay further, please don\'t hesitate to reach out. Keep up the excellent work, and I look forward to seeing your continued progress.

~Teacher Cathy

 

I think bad behavior is easily breaks other people\'s happiness or for their own happiness.

>>I think bad behavior easily breaks other people\'s happiness or one\'s own happiness.
For example, be pickpocket, fraud, murder, ect.

>>For example, pickpocketing, fraud, murder, etc.
I think we\'re animals that coexist after all, and we\'re collective animals that can\'t do anything if there\'s only one person.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I believe we are animals that coexist, and we are collective animals who cannot achieve much if there is only one person.
It\'s not a good thing to sacrifice yourself for everyone, but I also think it\'s a problem for people who value others low for themselves.

>>CORRECT

OR>>It\'s not a good thing to sacrifice yourself for everyone, but I also think it\'s problematic when people undervalue others in comparison to themselves.