the battery of my phone was dead
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Hi, Jane
The battery of my phone was dead, phone was disconnected....
Sometimes, I forget to charge my phone.. ㅠ.ㅠ
See you tomorrow~^^
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Hi [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today. I appreciate your effort in writing one to explain what happened. Enjoy your Monday!
T. JanE ^^
Hi, Jane>> CorrectThe battery of my phone was dead, phone was disconnected....>> My cellphone ran out of battery, so the line was disconnected.Sometimes, I forget to charge my phone.. ㅠ.ㅠ>> Correct.See you tomorrow~^^
>> Correct.
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