The bear\'s feat
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
This is wonderful, [이름]!
I would like to experience that Safari ride too. It\'s indeed interesting. Bears and lions are big predators, so they would definitely give you chill to the bones. See you!
~Teacher Eunice
I went to an amusement park, where there was \'SAPARI\' ride.
>>> I went to an amusement park where there was a \'SAFARI\' ride.
I took a ride on the stabilized bus and watched the many animals.
>>> I took a ride on the stabilized bus and watched many animals.
Among them, I remember the bear\'s feat.
>>> Correct!
The bear ate the prey that the driver threw, and he shook hands with the driver.
>>> Correct!
>>> The bear ate the meat that the driver threw, and he even shook hands with the driver.
It was a very interesting sight.
>>> Correct!
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