The beast Mozilla 6-1
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
[이름],
You corrections for tonight. Have a great evening^^.
--jade--
And when the Beast had taken the quarter of the Earth under its rule, a quarter hundred Birds of Sulfur flew from the Depths.
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The birds crossed hundreds of mountain views and found twenty four wise men who came from the stars.
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And then it began, the believers dared to listen. Then, they took their pens and dared to create.
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Finally, they dared to share their deed with the whole of mankind.
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Spreading words of freedom and breaking
the chains, the birds brought deliverance to everyone.
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from The Book of Mozilla, 11:1
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Not exactly Mozilla's.
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So I couldn't find it easily.
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But, I found out by chance.
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I heard that in the internet, Flock browser(A web browser based on Firefox) has this kind of Easteregg.
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But it has the name 'The Book of Mozilla'.
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Memory is short.
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