The beat places to visit in Korea.

2010-12-02 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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They say Jejudo,Seorak Mt...are the best place. I think Korea is very unique 'cause vary fast economic developed country and the only divided country in the world. Those are Korea's features. Then I strongly recommend Panmunjum and Market place. Actually. Panmunjum is not allowed to access but you can go Imjingak near by Panmunjum. Many people visiting there can see north Korea and DMZ, the tragic place. Market places wherever you go are very living things. People in there very busy and hustle and bustle even around midnight. You can figure out the reason why Korean always say 'quickly'. If you have some time you should go a Temple Stay. You can find true yourself and nature in there. It may be a unforgetable experience and give good memory.

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Hello SK! Your country sure has a lot of beautiful places a tourist can visit. I have heard a lot about Jejudo and also Kangwon-do. I would love to come and visit Korea someday.. I will visit the places that you mentioned. Good work! See you in class! T. Shy   They say Jejudo,Seorak Mt...are the best place. >> They say Jejudo and Mt.Seorak are the best places to visit.I think Korea is very unique 'cause vary fast economic developed country and the only divided country in the world. >> I think Korea is very unique 'cause it has a very fast economic development and the only divided country in the world. Those are Korea's features. >> CorrectThen I strongly recommend Panmunjum and Market place. >> CorrectActually. Panmunjum is not allowed to access but you can go Imjingak near by Panmunjum. >> Actually, Panmunjum is inaccessible but you can go to Imjingak nearby Panmunjum. Many people visiting there can see north Korea and DMZ, the tragic place. >> Many people visiting there can see North Korea and DMZ, the tragic place. Market places wherever you go are very living things. >> Market places wherever you go are very lively. People in there very busy and hustle and bustle even around midnight. >> People there are very busy. They hustle and bustle even around midnight. You can figure out the reason why Korean always say 'quickly'. >> You can figure out the reason why Koreans always say 'quickly'If you have some time you should go a Temple Stay. >> If you have some time you should go to a Temple Stay. You can find true yourself and nature in there. >> You can find your true self and nature in there. It may be a unforgetable experience and give good memory. >> It may be an unforgettable experience and it will give you a good memory.  

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