The beauty standards in Korea
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I think that many Korean women want slim style.
Actually, a skin tone is not important these day.
many people do tan their skin on purpose.
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I think that many Korean women want slim style.
>> I think Korean women prefer slim and sexy bodies.
Actually, a skin tone is not important these day many people do tan their skin on purpose.
Actually, a skin tone is not important these day many people do tan their skin on purpose.
>> These days, a person\'s skin tone is not a big deal anymore, tanned skin is also on trend.
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