The begin of the life is wavelength.
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In my opnion is the begin of the world is wavelength.
So with the life is same.
Thw wavelength means thought,feeling and a particle.
I think that it is the womb of life.
Parents and their children are equal in wavelength.
So they met. In othe words, it may be describe a destinity.
We have a natural wavelength each other, so I think that the goal of life is born to be natural wavelength.
It makes us grow and happy,naturally.
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In my opnion is the begin of the world is wavelength.
>>In my opinion, the beginning of the world is wavelength.So with the life is same.
>>So it is the same with life.Thw wavelength means thought,feeling and a particle.
>>Wavelength means thought, feeling and particle.I think that it is the womb of life.
>>CORRECT!Parents and their children are equal in wavelength.
>>CORRECT!So they met.
>>So they eventually meet.
In othe words, it may be describe a destinity.
>>In other words, it may be described as destiny. We have a natural wavelength each other, so I think that the goal of life is born to be natural wavelength.
>>Each of us has a natural wavelength, so I think that the goal of life is to be born in a natural one.It makes us grow and happy,naturally.
>>It makes us grow happily and naturally.
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