The begin of the life is wavelength.

2013-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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In my opnion is the begin of the world is wavelength. So with the life is same. Thw wavelength means thought,feeling and a particle. I think that it is the womb of life. Parents and their children are equal in wavelength. So they met. In othe words, it may be describe a destinity. We have a natural wavelength each other, so I think that the goal of life is born to be natural wavelength. It makes us grow and happy,naturally.

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Hello, Ms. [이름]^^ How are you? Thanks for accomplishing your homework^^ I deeply appreciate your thoughts! Expect more of that soon~ Have a great Monday^^ In my opnion is the begin of the world is wavelength. >>In my opinion, the beginning of the world is wavelength.So with the life is same. >>So it is the same with life.Thw wavelength means thought,feeling and a particle. >>Wavelength means thought, feeling and particle.I think that it is the womb of life. >>CORRECT!Parents and their children are equal in wavelength. >>CORRECT!So they met. >>So they eventually meet. In othe words, it may be describe a destinity. >>In other words, it may be described as destiny. We have a natural wavelength each other, so I think that the goal of life is born to be natural wavelength. >>Each of us has a natural wavelength, so I think that the goal of life is to be born in a natural one.It makes us grow and happy,naturally. >>It makes us grow happily and naturally.

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