The benefit of trees
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Today I would like to talk about the benefit of trees.
>> Today I would like to talk about the benefits of trees.
It is well-know knowledge that trees have been doing a lot of important role in the ecosystem that we are living.
>> It is a well-known knowledge that trees have been doing a lot of important role in the ecosystem that we are living.
Trees protect the soil.
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So, tree loss affect soil integrity.
>> So tree loss affects the soil integrity.
Huge amount of plants as well as insects, worms, reptiles and amphibians and small mammals relies on a dense canopy of branches.
>> Huge amount of plants as well as insects, worms, reptiles and amphibians and small mammals rely on a dense canopy of branches.
Trees also help prevent erosion.
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Because tree roots stabilize the soil.
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The trees provide all animals and plants with good habitats.
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The most important good factor of trees is that. that provide a natural defense against air pollution.
>> The most important good factor of trees is that it provides a natural defense against air pollution.
They remove carbon dioxide from the atmosphere while they emit oxygen and their leaves filter pollutants from the air.
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Deforestation is a serious problem, and finding a solution to it will not be simple.
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I involves a lot of different countries and many political and economic factors.
>> It involves a lot of different countries and many political and economic factors.
However, as individuals we can each make our contribution to the solution.
>> However, as individuals we can make our contributions to give solutions to the problem.
It involves being more responsible about our use of products that come from logging.
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So, how we can find the way to stop or loose deforestation.
>> So, how can we find the way to stop or loose deforestation?
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