the benefit of trees

The first thing we can do is recycling.

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A lot of papers products can be reused.

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We tent to go shopping carry our purchases home in a paper bag, and then throw the bag away.

>> We tend to go shopping carrying our purchases home in a paper bag, and then throw the bag away.

That means the bag is used only once, when it really has enough life in it to be used several times.

>> That means that the bag is being used once, when it can be really used several times.

We can take the bag with us on our next shopping.
>> We can take the shopping bag with us when we go shopping next time.
This is just one example of a paper product that can be reused.

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 Recycling is another important part of being less wasteful.

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Most kinds of house hold and office paper can be recycled.

>> Most house hold materials and office papers can be recycled.
 Reducing our use of paper might be the most effective action of all.

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 Electronic technology makes a lot of uses of paper unnecessary.

>> The use of electronic technology makes us also use a lot of papers unnecessarily.
 If we use electronic document well, we will be able to less the usage of unnecessary paper as well.

>> If we use electronic document well, we can lessen the usage of unnecessary paper as well.
 These actions may seem small compared with the terrible impacts of deforestation.

>> These actions may seem to be small compared to the terrible impacts of deforestation.
 However, they are things that we can each do and that, when added up really can make a difference.

>> However, there are things that each of us can do, and when added up, we can really make a big difference.

Hello Mr. [Name]! Well, I am hoping that you are having a great Monday.

Well done with your composition. You were able to bring out and tackle different topics based only from one subject. Indeed a good one.

Looking forward for more Mr. [Name]. ^^ Enjoy the rest of your day and God bless!

Always,

Kathrine ^^