The benefit when get a high score in OPIC
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Hi, teacher Sheila.
When we are looking for jobs, we get a benefit from a high English score like TOEIC, TOEIC Speaking, OPIC. It\'s not just benefit in OPIC. Companies sort a lot of employees, so they need the criterion. one of the criterion is the English score. That is why Koreans want to get a high score in English Test. Of course companies that are not using the English also demand it.
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Hello [이름] Ho! Great job for providing relevant details on your homework.
Most of your sentences are correct. Congratulations!
Until the next one!
See you in class on Monday!
~Teacher Sheila
When we are looking for jobs, we get a benefit from a high English score like TOEIC, TOEIC Speaking, OPIC.
>>CORRECT
OR>>When we are looking for jobs, it is our advantage if we have a high score in English exams like TOEIC and OPIc.
It\'s not just benefit in OPIC.
>>It\'s not just the benefit in OPIc.
Companies sort a lot of employees, so they need the criterion. one of the criterion is the English score.
>>CORRECT
That is why Koreans want to get a high score in English Test.
>>That is why Koreans want to get a high score in English tests.
Of course companies that are not using the English also demand it.
>>CORRECT
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