The benefits of exercising
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I am not sure those who exercise regularly are happier than those who don\'t. But I think those who exercise are healthier and more confident about themselves. Working out regularly, I can keep in good shape. And whenever I resist the temptation not to exercise, I can feel the strengthened mental power. It is always really hard to resist the temptation to be lazy and be comfortable. And thanks to exercising I look younger for my age. Until now I don\'t take some medication or supplements for health.
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I am not sure those who exercise regularly are happier than those who don\'t.
>> I\'m not convinced that those who exercise on a regular basis are happier than those who don\'t.
But I think those who exercise are healthier and more confident about themselves.
>> Correct!
OR: However, I believe that those who exercise are healthier and more self-confident.
OR: However, I believe that those who exercise are healthier and more self-confident.
Working out regularly, I can keep in good shape.
>> I can stay in shape if I exercise regularly.
And whenever I resist the temptation not to exercise, I can feel the strengthened mental power.
>> And I notice a boost in mental strength whenever I resist the temptation not to exercise.
It is always really hard to resist the temptation to be lazy and be comfortable.
>> Correct!
OR: It is always difficult to resist the temptation to be lazy and comfortable.
OR: It is always difficult to resist the temptation to be lazy and comfortable.
And thanks to exercising I look younger for my age.
>> Correct!
OR: And, as a result of my exercise, I appear younger for my age.
OR: And, as a result of my exercise, I appear younger for my age.
Until now I don\'t take some medication or supplements for health.
>> Correct!
OR: I have never taken any medication or health supplements.
OR: I have never taken any medication or health supplements.
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