the bereaved one
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Every time I saw her in the yearly alumni meeting, she looked so tired. She told us she was so busy to do farming that she couldn’t sleep more than four hours a day. However she always brought the best agricultural products for us, her buddies. Besides this, I‘ve heard that she helped certain the needy friends.
At first, the news that she started to run a green tea plantation in a remote area from Busan, surprised us very much, but now she became a successful farmer and a prominent in that area.
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Every time I see her during the yearly alumni meeting, she looks so tired.
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She told us she was so busy farming that she couldn’t sleep more than four hours a day. >>correct
However she always brought the best agricultural products for us, her buddies.
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Besides this, I‘ve heard that she helped certainly the needy friends. >>correct
At first, the news that she started to run a green tea plantation in a remote area from Busan, surprised us very much,
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but now she became a successful farmer and a prominent person in that area.
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