The best accomplishment of your performance:

2020-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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The best accomplishment of your performance: My key performance is the settlement of the service for final users of our devices when I was working in marketing. Our product is used at ICU in the general hospital, the users had to use our products for 24 hours. So, there were always some issues for service for emergency call during the nights. It is very hard for our technical staffs or our specialists to support the call during the nights. For this, I suggested the idea of 24hours call center which is operated by ICU experienced nurses who is not working in hospital anymore because of some reasons like taking care of their children or something else. Our customers can take the service for the trouble shooting issues whenever they want through this 24hour call center even during night time easily. I took advantage of this call center as a differentiated point from other competitor in the point of customer service and the feedback was very successful.

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The best accomplishment of your performance:
My key performance is the settlement of the service for final users of our devices when I was working in marketing. Our product is used at ICU in the general hospital, the users had to use our products for 24 hours. So, there were always some issues for service for emergency call during the nights. It is very hard for our technical staffs or our specialists to support the call during the nights. For this, I suggested the idea of 24hours call center which is operated by ICU experienced nurses who is not working in hospital anymore because of some reasons like taking care of their children or something else. Our customers can take the service for the trouble shooting issues whenever they want through this 24hour call center even during night time easily.
I took advantage of this call center as a differentiated point from other competitor in the point of customer service and the feedback was very successful.

My outstanding performance involves the settlement of the service for the final user of the device we worked on. The product was used in ICU in the general hospital. They used our product for 24 hours. Of course, there were some issues because of emergency calls at night. Our technical staff had a hard time supporting all the calls so I suggest the idea of a 24/7 call center which can be operated by ICU experienced nurses who are not working in a hospital. Our customers can give us a call and ask for assistance at any time 24/7. I took advantage of this to differentiate the point of customer services from our competitors and the feedback to us was positive.

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