The best activity on a vacation
학생이 쓴 원문
On a vacation I think swimming and surfing is the best activity. I haven\'t do surfing yet, but I want to do surfing. I like swimming in the sea so I want to swim when I have a vacation. Also making handmade souvenir is good activity too. I like making meaningful things. There are many activities when we have a vacation. I wish that I will have a long vacation with my friends to rest.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your homework.
I enjoyed reading it.
I hope that you\'ll be able to do the things you want and that you\'ll get a long vacation as well.
I hope that after this corona virus issue ends, we can all enjoy a fun and relaxing time. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> On a vacation, I think swimming and surfing are the best activities.
I haven\'t do surfing yet, but I want to do surfing.
>> I haven\'t gone surfing yet, but I want to do it.
I like swimming in the sea, so I want to swim when I have a vacation.
>> CORRECT.
Also making handmade souvenir is good activity too.
>> Making a handmade souvenir is also a good activity.
I like making meaningful things.
>> CORRECT.
There are many activities when we have a vacation.
>> CORRECT.
I wish that I will have a long vacation with my friends to rest.
>> CORRECT.
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