the best advice that I've ever received.

2013-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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some of the best advices that I have ever received came from books or the lyrics of the songs. Thease are the advices that I like and try to follow. 1. let's find nice 'now' 2. remember this nice moment. 3. who do you want to make smile today?(From our English tesxt)^^ 4 If you hesitate to give or not, just give. 5.If you hesitate to go or not, just go. 6.If you hesitate to buy or not, don't buy. 7.If you hesitate to tell or not, don't tell. 8.If you hesitate to eat or not, dont, eat. I am trying to follow thease advices. but it's very difficult for me. I think I should be more mature. Thank you.

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Hi there! Thank you for enumerating the best pieces of advice you have received. Please note that some nouns have only a singular form; you cannot add a number to the front or an \"S\" to the end of these words. For example, the noun advice, information, and weather. This group of nouns is called \'noncount\' or \'uncountable\' nouns. So note how I made the noun \'advice\' \"plural\". :)   Always, T.Jeny   some of the best advices that I have ever received came from books or the lyrics of the songs. >>Some of the best pieces of advice that I have ever received either came from books or lyrics of songs.Thease are the advices that I like and try to follow. >>These are the pieces of advice that I like and try to follow.1. let\'s find nice \'now\'>>Let\'s find nice \'now\'. 2. remember this nice moment.>>Remember this nice moment. 3. who do you want to make smile today?(From our English tesxt)^^>>Who do you want to make smile today? (From our English text) 4 If you hesitate to give or not, just give.>>Correct 5.If you hesitate to go or not, just go.>>Correct 6.If you hesitate to buy or not, don\'t buy.>>Correct 7.If you hesitate to tell or not, don\'t tell.>>Correct 8.If you hesitate to eat or not, dont, eat.>>Correct I am trying to follow thease advices. >>I am trying to follow these pieces of advice. but it\'s very difficult for me. >>But it\'s very difficult for me.I think I should be more mature. >>CorrectThank you. >>Correct

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