The best annual event you organized

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I have been organizing six annual events for business.

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They are technical skill contest, service center general manager face to face conference, summer and winter service clinic, June and October Service Workshop for service agencies. 

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Among them, the best annual event was the service clinic.

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It was a large-scale event, inviting more than 2,000 customers to service centers.

>> It was a large-scale event, inviting more than 2,000 costumers to the service centers.

Eighteen service centers participated in the event last year.

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The customers could benefit a 20% parts discount when they had their vehicles fixed during the event.

>> The customers could benefit 20% discount when they had their vehicles fixed during the event.

We also gave customers who visited the service centers a give-away like tumbler cups, towels, umbrellas, etc.

>> We also gave costumers who visited the service centers give-aways like tumblers, towels, umbrellas and etc.

Although it cost us a lot, it was worth holding the event to retain customers and improve customer’s loyalty toward our brand.

>> Although, it cost us a lot, it was worth organizing the event to retain customers and improve customer\'s loyalty towards our brand.

Although I mainly coordinated the program, my team members did all the actual works and I really appreciated their hard work.

>> Although I mainly coordinated the program, my team members did all the actual work and I really appreciated their hard work.