The best choice I’ve ever done in my life.
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The best choice I’ve ever done in my life was going to the Philippines to study English. Actually I was afraid of going there because it was first time to apart with my parents. But finally I decided to go there and I learned and experienced so many things. I don’t regret my choice. Also I spent hard time but it was unforgettable memory for me.
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The best choice I’ve ever done in my life was going to the Philippines to study English.
>> CORRECT
Actually I was afraid of going there because it was first time to apart with my parents.
>> Actually, I was afraid of going there because it was first time to apart with my parents.
But finally I decided to go there and I learned and experienced so many things.
>>But finally, I decided to go there to learn and experience so many things.
I don’t regret my choice.
>>CORRECT
Also I spent hard time but it was unforgettable memory for me.
>> Lastly, I had a hard time there but it was an unforgettable memory for me.
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