The best decision that I do is a starting of my youtube channel
학생이 쓴 원문
Youtube is so nice for you business.
you can advertise your business on this web. and many peoples can know what you do and
they would be realizing about your business and plus they will also realize the message that you want to send to them
so I have decided to start my business knowing using on the youtube
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]. It is a good thing you share information about your business and your knowledge on your field. I hope more foreigners will subscribe to your channel as well. Good luck with it next year and I wish you more success.^^ ~Teacher Jane c\",)
The best decision that I do is a starting of my youtube channel
>> The best decision I made was starting my YouTube channel.
Youtube is so nice for you business.
>> YouTube is great/ nice for business.
you can advertise your business on this web. and many peoples can know what you do and
>> You can advertise your business on this website and many people can know what you do.
they would be realizing about your business and plus they will also realize the message that you want to send to them
>> They would realize/ know about your business plus they will also realize the message that you want to send to them.
so I have decided to start my business knowing using on the youtube
>> So I have decided to start my business by sharing knowledge/ information on YouTube.
The best decision that I do is a starting of my youtube channel
>> The best decision I made was starting my YouTube channel.
Youtube is so nice for you business.
>> YouTube is great/ nice for business.
you can advertise your business on this web. and many peoples can know what you do and
>> You can advertise your business on this website and many people can know what you do.
they would be realizing about your business and plus they will also realize the message that you want to send to them
>> They would realize/ know about your business plus they will also realize the message that you want to send to them.
so I have decided to start my business knowing using on the youtube
>> So I have decided to start my business by sharing knowledge/ information on YouTube.
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