The best hotel I stayed at
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I couldn\'t remember the exact location and the date but I once stayed near where the hotel was surrounded with mountains. At least I\'m sure that it was at Thailand, summer. It was about 6th floor but the view from the hotel was fantastic. It was like watching himalayas in Thailand. And at the first floor, there was a farm with animals. We could feed them some snack. My best hotel was that surrounded with himalayas seeming mountains.
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I couldn\'t remember the exact location and the date but I once stayed near where the hotel was surrounded with mountains.
>>> I couldn\'t remember the exact location and the date but I once stayed near where the hotel was surrounded by mountains.
At least I\'m sure that it was at Thailand, summer.
>>> At least I\'m sure that it was in Thailand, summer.
It was about 6th floor but the view from the hotel was fantastic.
>>> It was about the 6th floor but the view from the hotel was fantastic.
It was like watching himalayas in Thailand.
>>> It was like watching the Himalayas in Thailand.
And at the first floor, there was a farm with animals.
>>> And on the first floor, there was a farm with animals.
We could feed them some snack.
>>> We could feed them some snacks.
My best hotel was that surrounded with himalayas seeming mountains.
>>>My best hotel was surrounded by Himalayas seeming mountains.
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