The best is yet to come. Do you agree?

2014-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I think this is an interesting question. On one hand, we have present-moment awareness. The very real fact is that, no matter what we do, there is only Now. But on the other hand, we have the fact that we are always becoming. Just as an acorn becomes a sapling and becomes a mighty oak tree, we are becoming the best version of ourselves. Every experience that we've been through, every hardship we've endured, every love that has moved us, has brought us closer to touching a deeper knowing of who and what we are. Patience is a virtue. Good things come to those who wait. There can be no other way to see this life (and those that have come before. A balance of knowing that today is always the best day ever, and that now is all we ever have. Yet also seeing that now is infinitely becoming now, now, now, now.... And we can count on this to some degree, but we shouldn't count on it so much that we skim through the present moment in the hopes that we can get to the better side of best.

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An inspirational essay Sir [이름]! I was moved by your ideas. Yes, you are right. We have to be patient. There is always a perfect time for us. We just have to strive harder to attaint the goals we reallly want. Let us make the most of our time everyday. Live to the fullest! Hihihihi! Talk to you soon. Have a great day!Teacher Nina   I think this is an interesting question. >> Correct!  On one hand, we have present-moment awareness. >> Correct!  The very real fact is that, no matter what we do, there is only Now. >> Correct!  >> OR: The very real fact is that no matter what we do, we only have the present. But on the other hand, we have the fact that we are always becoming. >> Correct!  >> OR; But on the other hand, there is also a fact that we are always changing. Just as an acorn becomes a sapling and becomes a mighty oak tree, we are becoming the best version of ourselves. >> Correct!  Every experience that we\'ve been through, every hardship we\'ve endured, every love that has moved us, has brought us closer to touching a deeper knowing of who and what we are. >> Correct!  Patience is a virtue. >> Correct!  Good things come to those who wait. >> Correct!  There can be no other way to see this life (and those that have come before. >> Correct!  >> OR: There can be no other way to see this life and what we had in the past. A balance of knowing that today is always the best day ever, and that now is all we ever have. >> Correct!  >> OR: A balance of knowing that today is always the best day ever, and that now is all we have. Yet also seeing that now is infinitely becoming now, now, now, now.... >> Correct!  And we can count on this to some degree, but we shouldn\'t count on it so much that we skim through the present moment in the hopes that we can get to the better side of best. >> Correct!  >> OR: And we can depend on this to some degree, but we shouldn\'t count on it so much. Because we might skim through the present moment in the hopes that we can get to the better side of best.

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