The best memories
학생이 쓴 원문
I have the best memories of going to the beach with my family on the holiday. I like sashimi, I like seaside scenery, and I like taking pictures. It is also fun to be with the whole family. I want to go to the beach again.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next week! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I have the best memories of going to the beach with my family on the holiday.
>>> I have the best memories of going to the beach with my family on a holiday.
I like sashimi, I like seaside scenery, and I like taking pictures.
>>>> CORRECT!
It is also fun to be with the whole family.
>>> CORRECT!
I want to go to the beach again.
>>> CORRECT!
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