The best memory I have in school
학생이 쓴 원문
I think all memories are so memorable for me. The best memory is just eating snacks at school playing games. I didn’t think that those are special things but I realize that it was valuable memory. I think every moment was the best memory.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! School days have a lot memories that we can cherish in a lifetime. That\'s usually the time where you would meet the people that would have a big role in your life. It\'s nice that you still remember a part of it:). Make more memories that you can look back at in the future.
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I think all memories are so memorable for me.
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The best memory is just eating snacks at school playing games.
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I didn’t think that those are special things but I realize that it was valuable memory.
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I think every moment was the best memory.
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