The best movie I’ve watched on Netflix
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The best movie I’ve watched on Netflix was Coco. Coco is the movie about a festival in Mexico, which is for dead people. Mexicans remember their family who was passed away in a positive way. In other words, they enjoy the festival with music and foods that was loved by dead people. There are fulled with colorful embellishments and people make up their face like skull. They believe that a dead person can be alive in other world until they are remembered.
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The best movie I’ve watched on Netflix was Coco.
>> Correct.
Coco is the movie about a festival in Mexico, which is for dead people.
>> Correct.
Mexicans remember their family who was passed away in a positive way.
>> Mexicans remember their family who passed away in a positive way.
In other words, they enjoy the festival with music and foods that was loved by dead people.
>> Correct.
There are fulled with colorful embellishments and people make up their face like skull.
>> There are filled with colorful embellishments and people make up their face like skull.
They believe that a dead person can be alive in other world until they are remembered.
>> They believe that a dead person can be alive in other world as long as they are being remembered.
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