The best movie that I have watched.
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My best movie among I\'ve recently watched is Aladin. This is because the movie was filled of glamorous musics and magical changes of appearance of Jinie. I love his humorous lines and mischievous acting using face expression, dancing, and funny songs. Also a monkey called Abu which is Aladin\'s pet is the cutest point of the movie. I was surprised at how clever he is all the time when I watch the movie .
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Hi [이름]. Thanks for sharing. :)
-T. Gabby :)
My best movie among I\'ve recently watched is Aladin.
>> My best movie that I\'ve watched was Aladin.
This is because the movie was filled of glamorous musics and magical changes of appearance of Jinie.
>> This is because the movie was filled of glamorous songs and magical changes of appearance of the Jinie.
I love his humorous lines and mischievous acting using face expression, dancing, and funny songs.
>> I love his humorous lines and mischievous acting by using his face expressions, dancing, and funny songs.
Also a monkey called Abu which is Aladin\'s pet is the cutest point of the movie.
>> Correct.
I was surprised at how clever he is all the time when I watch the movie .
>> I was surprised at how clever he is all the time when I watched the movie .
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