The best part about living in Korea
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the best part of about living in Korea is hospital.
I heard it’s cheaper than other countries and we have good environment with hospital. Health is most important thing so I think it is the best part.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Yeah! I heard that the health insurance there is really good. I think it\'s a good thing especially nowadays that we\'re experiencing a pandemic.
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I think the best part of about living in Korea is hospital.
>>I think the best part of about living in Korea are the hospitals.
I heard it’s cheaper than other countries and we have good environment with hospital.
>> I heard that it\'s cheaper than other countries and we have good environment.
Health is most important thing so I think it is the best part.
>> Health is most important thing in our lives so I think this is the best part about living in Korea.
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