The best part of my holiday.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Gabby.
These are the times I spent with my family in the golf field.
Last Wednesday, I prepared lunch boxes to eat next day with my family at the golf club.
I think it\'s the first time I\'ve prepared a lunch box.
We always eat in the restaurant. This also is one of big pleasures.
We can\'t enjoy it because of corona virous. Be damned.
We went the golf field with lunch boxes.
We played 9 holes and then we ate delicious lunch at a pavilion which caddy guided and then we played more 9 hole.
We went out at 9 am and came back at 5 pm.
Our family enjoyed the golf the whole day.
Good night. See you tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hi Suzan. Great work! :)
-T.Gabby
Hi, Gabby.
>> Correct.
These are the times I spent with my family in the golf field.
These are the times I spent with my family in the golf field.
>> These are the times that I spent with my family in the golf field.
Last Wednesday, I prepared lunch boxes to eat next day with my family at the golf club.
Last Wednesday, I prepared lunch boxes to eat next day with my family at the golf club.
>> Last Wednesday, I prepared lunch boxes to eat the next day with my family at the golf club.
I think it\'s the first time I\'ve prepared a lunch box.
>> Correct.
We always eat in the restaurant. This also is one of big pleasures.
We always eat in the restaurant. This also is one of big pleasures.
>> We always eat in the restaurant. This also is one of our big pleasures.
We can\'t enjoy it because of corona virous. Be damned.
We can\'t enjoy it because of corona virous. Be damned.
>> We can\'t enjoy it because of corona virous. Damned.
We went the golf field with lunch boxes.
We went the golf field with lunch boxes.
>> Correct.
We played 9 holes and then we ate delicious lunch at a pavilion which caddy guided and then we played more 9 hole.
We played 9 holes and then we ate delicious lunch at a pavilion which caddy guided and then we played more 9 hole.
>> Correct.
We went out at 9 am and came back at 5 pm.
We went out at 9 am and came back at 5 pm.
>> Correct.
Our family enjoyed the golf the whole day.
Our family enjoyed the golf the whole day.
>> Our family enjoyed playing golf the whole day.
Good night. See you tomorrow.
Good night. See you tomorrow.
>> Correct.
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