The best part of the Seoul
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that the best part of Seoul is HongDae.
Because there doesn’t sleep at night.
When I go to home at midnight, I’m not scared and go to home safely.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Jenna. Thank you for telling me a little information about this place. We will talk more about this in class. I\'ll see you then.~ T. Lyn
I think that the best part of Seoul is HongDae.
>>I think Hongdae is the best place in Seoul.
Because there doesn’t sleep at night.
Because there doesn’t sleep at night.
>>It is because people don\'t seem to sleep at night.
When I go to home at midnight, I’m not scared and go to home safely.
When I go to home at midnight, I’m not scared and go to home safely.
>>Even if I go home at midnight, I\'m not scared and I feel like I\'m safe.
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