The best pet.
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Hello once again, Ji [이름]!
Have you ever tried to take care of a mouse?
They are very tricky so you should also be very clever
when you take care of them.
Take care all the time!
What is a best pet??
The best pet dosn\'t snoop or pee or drible.
>> The best pet doesn\'t snoop or pee or dribble.
And it dosn\'t lay all day and chase pepole like crazy.
>> And it doesn\'t lay all day and chase people like crazy.
And the best pet isn\'t nosiy or lazy.
>> And the best pet isn\'t noisy or lazy.
Also it dosen\'t peck pepole in to a nub, and gobble up you.
>> Also, it doesn\'t peck people into a nub and gobble you up.
And the best pet should be cute or beutyful or handsome and pretty and has a furr.
>>And the best pet should be cute, beautiful or handsome and has fur.
So the best pet should be me, a mice.
>> So the best pet for me is a mouse.
Mice is cute and has furr, and it\'s not nosiy or lazy and it dosen\'t peck you to a nub.
>> A mouse is cute, has fur, not noisy or lazy, and it doesn\'t peck you into a nub.
And mics can fit in your pocket!!!!!!!!
>>And it can fit in your pocket!
THE END
>> Correct
BYE~BYE~
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