The best pets
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I used to be a dog person. I hated cats because I had some prejudices about cats. But thanks to my first daughter I change my thoughts gradually. She has eight cats, most of which are very cute and sweet. The most powerful factor that affects my attitude is one stray cat that comes to me whenever I get to my weekend house. He is very friendly and talkative. He always follows me making a very cute sound. Since he came to my second house I have changed. From a dog person to a cat person.
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Good morning, Gi [이름]!
I love cats too!! They are so cute and fluffy! ^^
I love cats too!! They are so cute and fluffy! ^^
Thank you for finishing your assignment. You did an excellent job!
Anyway, see you tomorrow~
-T.Jhozel
I used to be a dog person.
>> I used to love dogs.
I hated cats because I had some prejudices about cats.
>> Correct!
OR: I disliked cats because I had some prejudices against them.
But thanks to my first daughter I change my thoughts gradually.
>> But, thanks to my first daughter, I\'m gradually changing my mind.
She has eight cats, most of which are very cute and sweet.
>> Correct!
The most powerful factor that affects my attitude is one stray cat that comes to me whenever I get to my weekend house.
>> Correct!
OR: The most powerful influence on my attitude is a stray cat who comes to me whenever I arrive at my weekend home.
OR: The most powerful influence on my attitude is a stray cat who comes to me whenever I arrive at my weekend home.
He is very friendly and talkative.
OR >> The cat is very friendly and clingy.
He always follows me making a very cute sound.
>> Correct!
Since he came to my second house I have changed. From a dog person to a cat person.
>> I\'ve changed since the cat moved into my second home. From a dog lover to a cat lover.
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