the best place i visit before

2010-10-27 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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my most memorable traveling experience was going to the Thailand with my family. i stay there for three nights.during stay here l do alot of things. i ate a lot of delicious seafood like kingcrabs,big shrimps and crawfishes. i visited more then 5 countrys. i'm so exciting and funny when we went to Pattaya . we did alot of things in the Pattaya. such as scuba diving, zet skiand banana boat . i choose thailand because i did alot of activities

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hello there paul, thank you so much for making your homework..;0) Im glad to know that you really enjoy going on a trip with your family, its nice to know that with that young age, you can appreciate family already, job well done! T.Cam Anyway here are the following corrections you had: my most memorable traveling experience was going to the Thailand with my family. >>correcti stay there for three nights.during stay here l do alot of things. >>I stayed there for 3 nights and I did a lot of things in my stay therei ate a lot of delicious seafood like kingcrabs,big shrimps and crawfishes. i visited more then 5 countrys. >>correcti'm so exciting and funny when we went to Pattaya >>I felt so happy and excited when I went to Pattatyawe did alot of things in the Pattaya.such as scuba diving, zet skiand banana boat .>>We did a lot of things in Pattaya such as scuba diving, jet ski and riding banana boati choose thailand because i did alot of activities >>correct

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