The best place to rest in my home
학생이 쓴 원문
The best place to rest in my home is the computer room because I can play games and watch movies there while I rest. The room is cool and kind of dark that is why it is great to see a movie and play games relaxing myself.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Happy Friday! Enjoy your weekend ^^
T. DON
The best place to rest in my home is the computer room because I can
play games and watch movies there while I rest. The room is cool and
kind of dark that is why it is great to see a movie and play games
relaxing myself.
>> The best place to rest in my home is the computer room because I can
play games and watch movies there while I rest. The room is cool and
kind of dark that is why it is great to see a movie and play games
relaxing by myself.
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