The best plan on the holiday is..

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First of all, It depends on how my body condition is.

>>> First of all, it depends on how my body condition is.

If I tired the day before, maybe I’d love to wake up late.

>>> If I was tired the day before, maybe I\'d love to wake up late.

But it is totally different case.

>>> But it is totally a different case.

If I doesn’t feel tired but I woke up late, It is bad start of the day.

>>> If I didn\'t feel tired but I woke up late, it is a bad start of the day.

Because I have a lot to do.

Studying English, arrears of my work and so on.

>>> Because I have a lot of things to do such as studying English, working on my unfinished obligations and so on.

So It is a matter of what I have to do something.

>>> So it is a matter of what I have to do.

I just want to tell you based on when I have to do something and don’t need to take a rest more.

>>> I just want to tell you that my plans depend on the things I have to do.

Above all things, I must wake up early.

>>> Correct!

The reason that I want to wake up early is Not only just for practical reasons, but It’s important for the atmosphere.

>>> The reason that I want to wake up early is not only for practical reasons but also for setting up the tone for the day.

That’s why I think the hours of rising is priority.
>>> That\'s why  I think the wake up time is a priority.

Indeed, ideal holiday is taking a rest enough.

>>> Indeed, my ideal holiday is taking enough rest.

But I just don’t want to sleep late. That’s a waste of time.

>>> But I don\'t want to sleep for a long time. That\'s a waste of time.