The best season

2016-10-18 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

I don't really like a cold. Winter is so cold. And so, I hate a winter. So it is, I don't like a summer. Summer is so hot. Hot weather makes out of spirits. In Korea, people said that spring is a season of women, fall is a season of man. When it comes a spring, women's clothes is very colors. Womens take off thick clothes which is wearing the winter. And also, everything is fresh and vivid in spring. Whereas the fall is the season of melancholy. The leaves are falling. People go away somewhere. Holidaymakers in october is the largest number of months a year. Everyone left home to enjoy the outdoor. All the people is pleasure. But I sometimes fall in deep thought. I feel loneliness by myself. However I like a autumn.

강사 첨삭

Hello, sir!

Thank you for always doing your homework. You did great as usual in conveying your ideas. Each of us have our favorite time of the year. I find it funny though sometimes when I think about it. During the summer, people complain about the hot weather. When winter comes, they complain that it\'s very cold. People are never satisfied, I guess. Have a great day. See you tomorrow!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I don\'t really like a cold. Winter is so cold. And so, I hate a winter.

>> I don\'t really like being cold. Winter is very cold. And so, I hate winter.

So it is, I don\'t like a summer. Summer is so hot.

>> So is summer. I don\'t like it because it\'s so hot.

Hot weather makes out of spirits.

>> Hot weather dampens the spirit.

In Korea, people said that spring is a season of women, fall is a season of man.

>> In Korea, people say that Spring is a season for women and Fall for men.

When it comes a spring, women\'s clothes is very colors.

>> When spring comes, women\'s clothes are very colorful.

Womens take off thick clothes which is wearing the winter.

>> Women take off their thick clothes which they wear in the winter.

And also, everything is fresh and vivid in spring.

>> correct!

Whereas fall is the season of melancholy.

>> correct!

The leaves are falling. People go away somewhere.

>> correct!

Holidaymakers in october is the largest number of months a year.

>> During the month of October, we can see the most number of holidaymakers.

Everyone left home to enjoy the outdoor.

>> Everybody leave home to enjoy the outdoor.

All the people is pleasure.

>> All of them are seeking for pleasure.

But I sometimes fall in deep thought.

>> correct!

I feel loneliness by myself. However I like a autumn.

>> I feel lonely being by myself. However, I like Autumn.

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