The best season
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, sir!
Thank you for always doing your homework. You did great as usual in conveying your ideas. Each of us have our favorite time of the year. I find it funny though sometimes when I think about it. During the summer, people complain about the hot weather. When winter comes, they complain that it\'s very cold. People are never satisfied, I guess. Have a great day. See you tomorrow!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I don\'t really like a cold. Winter is so cold. And so, I hate a winter.
>> I don\'t really like being cold. Winter is very cold. And so, I hate winter.
So it is, I don\'t like a summer. Summer is so hot.
>> So is summer. I don\'t like it because it\'s so hot.
Hot weather makes out of spirits.
>> Hot weather dampens the spirit.
In Korea, people said that spring is a season of women, fall is a season of man.
>> In Korea, people say that Spring is a season for women and Fall for men.
When it comes a spring, women\'s clothes is very colors.
>> When spring comes, women\'s clothes are very colorful.
Womens take off thick clothes which is wearing the winter.
>> Women take off their thick clothes which they wear in the winter.
And also, everything is fresh and vivid in spring.
>> correct!
Whereas fall is the season of melancholy.
>> correct!
The leaves are falling. People go away somewhere.
>> correct!
Holidaymakers in october is the largest number of months a year.
>> During the month of October, we can see the most number of holidaymakers.
Everyone left home to enjoy the outdoor.
>> Everybody leave home to enjoy the outdoor.
All the people is pleasure.
>> All of them are seeking for pleasure.
But I sometimes fall in deep thought.
>> correct!
I feel loneliness by myself. However I like a autumn.
>> I feel lonely being by myself. However, I like Autumn.
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