The best season in my hometown is summer and winter.
학생이 쓴 원문
Summer is so hot and in the winter snow is come.
I like all four seasons in Korea.
I like the rainy season in summer and the snow in the winter.
And the wind in the autumn and the new bud in the spring is good thing I like.
In this winter the snow is come very weakly.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
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Summer is so hot and in the winter snow is come.
>> It\'s hot in the summer and it\'s cold in the winter.
>> It\'s hot in the summer and it\'s cold in the winter.
I like all four seasons in Korea.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
I like the rainy season in summer and the snow in the winter.
>> I like it when it rains in the summer and when it snows in the winter.
>> I like it when it rains in the summer and when it snows in the winter.
And the wind in the autumn and the new bud in the spring is good thing I like.
>> I like the autumn wind and the blooming flowers in the spring.
>> I like the autumn wind and the blooming flowers in the spring.
In this winter the snow is come very weakly.
>> We experienced a few snow showers last winter.
>> We experienced a few snow showers last winter.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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