The best teacher

2010-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 janel

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My best teacher was my mathmatics teacher. When I was in highschool , I didn't like him because he had a great interesting on me. Every his class , he asked me the answer of mathmatical problem. Since I was poor at mathmatics, I usually didn't answer his question. He scolded me hard. That's why I was got to hate him. Oneday I heard suprising news that he recommended me as a scholarshipstudent. I was really moved by him. Thanks to him , I studied more harder so I could go to good university. Though I don't keep in touch with him, I always thank to him.

강사 첨삭

I like this answer.:) It turned out that you were actually the favorite student. Here are your corrections: -Teacher JM  My best teacher was my mathmatics teacher. >>>My best teacher was my mathematics teacher.When I was in highschool , I didn't like him because he had a great interesting on me. >>>When I was in highschool , I didn't like him because he had a great interest on me.Every his class , he asked me the answer of mathmatical problem. >>>Every time I was in his class, he would ask me the answers of mathematical problems.Since I was poor at mathmatics, I usually didn't answer his question. >>>Since I was poor at mathematics, I usually didn't answer his questions.He scolded me hard. That's why I was got to hate him. >>>He scolded me hard. That's why I got to hate him.Oneday I heard suprising news that he recommended me as a scholarshipstudent. >>>One day I heard surprising news: He recommended me for a scholarship in school.I was really moved by him. >>>CorrectThanks to him , I studied more harder so I could go to good university. >>>Thanks to him, I studied harder so that I could go to a good university.Though I don't keep in touch with him, I always thank to him. >>>Though I don't keep in touch with him, I'm always thankful of him.

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