The best thing about my grandma
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강사 첨삭
-Khai
I think that the best thing about my grandma is her personality.
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She is so mild that I rarely saw her angry.
>> She is so calm that I rarely see her angry.
Also she haven\'t gotten angry when I joke or nag at her.
>> Also she hasn\'t gotten angry when I joke or nag at her.
For example, sometimes I nagged at her about [이름]ing diper.
>> For example, sometimes I nag at her about [이름]ing diapers.
My grandmother always wear a diper because she can\'t walk herself, so she isn\'t able to go to toilet by herself.
>> My grandmother always wears diapers because she can\'t walk on her own, so she isn\'t able to go to the toilet by herself.
I insisted that my grandma have to [이름]e her diper when getting wet, so I [이름]ed a wet diper storbbunly.
>> I insisted that my grandma should have new diapers after getting wet, so I usually [이름]e her diapers stubbornly.
At that time, my grandma accepted my opinion and [이름]ed her posture that I could [이름]e her diper easily.
>> That time, my grandma accepted my opinion and [이름]ed her position so that I could [이름]e her diaper easily.
Although I have lived with my grandparents since I was born, I think that the relationship with my grandma is very unique.
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Most of my friends say that they don\'t have bond with their grandmother.
>> Most of my friends say that they don\'t have a bond with their grandmother.
Because of my grandma\'s mild personality, she and I could be a good friends in the world.
>> My grandma has a calm personality. She and I could be good friends.
I hope my grandmother doesn\'t get worse, because we promise that she will live until she is 100 years old!
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