The best thing in Japan
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Japan is famous for its hot springs. Whenever I visit the country, I make sure that I can use hot springs in or near my accommodation. In the recent trip to Tokyo, the best thing was that I could use hot spring water in my hotel. I took a lower-body bathing every night. I took a shower every morning. I enjoyed hot spring every day.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework! I can already imagine how relaxing your trip was, even when you told me that things didn\'t go as you expected. But at least, at the end of the day, you can soak yourself in a hot spring, and I\'m pretty sure, it is super relaxing.
- T. Caitlyn
Japan is famous for its hot springs.
>> CORRECT
Whenever I visit the country, I make sure that I can use hot springs in or near my accommodation.
>> CORRECT
In the recent trip to Tokyo, the best thing was that I could use hot spring water in my hotel.
>> CORRECT
I took a lower-body bathing every night.
>> I soaked in a lower-body bath every night.
I took a shower every morning.
>> CORRECT
I enjoyed hot spring every day.
>> I enjoyed the hot spring every day.
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