The best thing in Japan
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My husband and I enjoyed hot springs most. I wanted him to experience Ryocan in this trip. I experienced it in the trip with my mom 10 years ago. My husband liked Ryocan and enjoyed hot springs day and night. I was glad he liked it.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I am happy that you enjoyed your vacation in Japan. Also, it\'s nice that your husband gained new experiences from this trip.
- T. Caitlyn
My husband and I enjoyed hot springs most.
>> My husband and I enjoyed the hot springs the most.
I wanted him to experience Ryocan in this trip.
>> CORRECT
I experienced it in the trip with my mom 10 years ago.
>> CORRECT
My husband liked Ryocan and enjoyed hot springs day and night.
>> CORRECT
I was glad he liked it.
>> CORRECT
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