The best things.
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I like to climb mountains and travel to famous places or abroad.
Before the epidemic, I often climbed and traveled a lot of places.
One of the best things I remember is climbing Mt. Halla through China.
Another is that I have traveled to Japan with my parents to celebrate their birthday.
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Hi [이름] Ha!
This is the perfect example to express your thoughts.
Memories are a great thing.
It\'s nice to look back once in a while.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I like to climb mountains and travel to famous places or abroad.
>> Correct
Before the epidemic, I often climbed and traveled a lot of places.
Before the epidemic, I often climbed and traveled a lot of places.
>> Before the pandemic, I often climbed and traveled to a lot of places.
One of the best things I remember is climbing Mt. Halla through China.
One of the best things I remember is climbing Mt. Halla through China.
>> Correct
Another is that I have traveled to Japan with my parents to celebrate their birthday.
Another is that I have traveled to Japan with my parents to celebrate their birthday.
>> Another is when I have traveled to Japan with my parents to celebrate their birthday.
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