The best way of learning about life is through experience.
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ESSAY: Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Other people believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience. Compare the advantages of these two different ways of learning about life. Which do you think is preferable? Use specific examples to support your preference.
I would say that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience even if there are some advantages of learning about life by listening to the advice. Of course you know, If you have a chance listening to the advice from your family or friends, you can get a lot of useful information easily. But I think that in this case it is hard to make your own experience from other person\'s advice. Because situation is different from person to person. But if you have your own experience you can get more exact feeling or knowledge to helpful your life. So I prefer to learn something from my own experience.
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I would say that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience even if there are some advantages of learning about life by listening to the advice.
>>> I would say that the best way of learning about life is through personal experiences even if there are some advantages of learning about life by listening to some advice.
Of course you know, If you have a chance listening to the advice from your family or friends, you can get a lot of useful information easily.
>>> Of course you know, if you have a chance listening to the advice from your family or friends, you can get a lot of useful information easily.
But I think that in this case it is hard to make your own experience from other person\'s advice.
>>>However, in this case it is hard to make your own experience from other person\'s advice.
Because situation is different from person to person.
>>> Because we all have our own circumstances.
But if you have your own experience you can get more exact feeling or knowledge to helpful your life.
>>> But if you have your own experience you can get more exact feelings or knowledge which will be helpful in your life.
So I prefer to learn something from my own experience.
>>> CORRECT
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