The best way to motivate people is through money. Do you agree? Explain you answer
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No, it is absolutely not. Monetary compensation can bring a short-term effect, but it won’t last. Money can play a role in motivating people to some extent, but there are more critical factors that can affect people’s morale. Speaking of my personal experience, when I moved to another company, I was paid almost double compared to that of my previous company. At first, I was highly motivated and willing to work extra hours even the weekends. However, such mind-set and attitude did not last even for six months. I was getting used to the salary and my motivation was getting faded away. No matter how much money you receive, as time goes by, you will think that you deserve it or the money is not enough. The best way to motivate people is to listen, try to understand, and share their feelings. Appeal to their emotions. If some bad things happen to your employees, you show your sympathy and embrace him/her from your heart. People prefer to be motivated by positive emotions like pride.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Sir [이름]!
Happy mid-week!
Thanks for sharing your opinions about the topic.
You are definitely right! The effect is just for a short time. ^^
Did you have a good day? I hope you did.
Have a great night.
Teacher Nina
No, it is absolutely not.
>> correct
Monetary compensation can bring a short-term effect, but it won’t last.
>> correct
Money can play a role in motivating people to some extent, but there are more critical factors that can affect people’s morale.
>> correct
Speaking of my personal experience, when I moved to another company, I was paid almost double compared to that of my previous company.
>> correct
At first, I was highly motivated and willing to work extra hours even the weekends.
>> At first, I was highly motivated and willing to work extra hours even on the weekends.
However, such mind-set and attitude did not last even for six months.
>> correct
I was getting used to the salary and my motivation was getting faded away.
>> correct
No matter how much money you receive, as time goes by, you will think that you deserve it or the money is not enough.
>> correct
The best way to motivate people is to listen, try to understand, and share their feelings.
>> correct
Appeal to their emotions.
>> correct
If some bad things happen to your employees, you show your sympathy and embrace him/her from your heart.
>> correct
People prefer to be motivated by positive emotions like pride.
>> correct
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