The best weather.
학생이 쓴 원문
hello Gabby.
It\'s sunny here today. How\'s the weather there today?
I like sunny the best. My condition is the best good that time.
Speaking of weather, I like very snow. Do you have seen it?
When my son was children, I saw very beautiful and many snow-flowered trees.
It was an amazing sight. I can\'t forget it.
Driver was afraid of that but I enjoyed a lot. The driver was my husband.
The road got out of shape as traffic jam, slippery and became dark.
The snow make beautiful of the world but it make dirty too.
I just enjoyed.
All thing seems double-sidedness.
By the way my body likes sunny.
Good night Gabby.
Fighting(himnae 힘내) Cheer up... for tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hi Suzan. You are awesome! Thank you.
-T. Gabby :)
hello Gabby.
>> Correct.
It\'s sunny here today.
It\'s sunny here today.
>> Correct.
How\'s the weather there today?
>> Correct.
I like sunny the best.
I like sunny the best.
>> Sunny day is the best for me.
My condition is the best good that time.
>> I feel good on a sunny day.
Speaking of weather, I like very snow.
Speaking of weather, I like very snow.
>> Speaking of weather, I like snow.
Do you have seen it?
>> Have you seen it?
When my son was children,
When my son was children,
>> When my son was still a little,
I saw very beautiful and many snow-flowered trees.
>> Correct.
It was an amazing sight.
It was an amazing sight.
>> Correct.
I can\'t forget it.
>> Correct.
Driver was afraid of that but I enjoyed a lot.
Driver was afraid of that but I enjoyed a lot.
>> The driver was afraid of that but I enjoyed it a lot.
The driver was my husband.
>> Correct.
The road got out of shape as traffic jam, slippery and became dark.
The road got out of shape as traffic jam, slippery and became dark.
>> The road got out of shape because of traffic jam, slippery road and sky got dark.
The snow make beautiful of the world but it make dirty too.
The snow make beautiful of the world but it make dirty too.
>> The snow makes the world beautiful but it also makes it dirty.
I just enjoyed.
I just enjoyed.
>> I enjoyed it.
All thing seems double-sidedness.
All thing seems double-sidedness.
>> All things have two sides.
By the way my body likes sunny.
By the way my body likes sunny.
>> Correct.
Good night Gabby.
Good night Gabby.
>> Correct.
Fighting(himnae 힘내) Cheer up... for tomorrow.
Fighting(himnae 힘내) Cheer up... for tomorrow.
>> Correct.
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