The big acident
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
This is surprising, Ms. [이름]!
I\'m very glad to know that you didn\'t suffer from a serious injury. God is truly amazing! See you in class!
~Teacher Eunice
When I had a traffic acident, I greatly surprised.
>>> When I had a traffic acident, I was surprised.
>>> OR: I was stunned by the traffic accident that I had before.
It was a snowy day.
>>> Correct!
I was driving down the hill on the way home, driving around a curve.
>>> I was driving down the hill around a curve on the way home.
By the way, suddenly the car rolled several times like a ball.
>>> Correct!
The car was crushed out of business right away, but I was not hurt by God\'s help.
>>> Correct!
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