The biggest adventure I\'ve had in my life.
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear. Selene
Long time ago, I have done a musical in the church. I was main character.
I\'ve do memorized many dialogue and songs. At that time very trembled, but I have very interested in that musical.
I\'ve do one best. I\'ve don\'t forgot it, that day.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, [이름]!^^
Great job in sharing your ideas through your writing skills. Keep it up!^_^
The biggest adventure I\\\'ve had in my life.
>>>The biggest adventure I\'ve had in my life.
I was main character.
>>>I was the main character.
I\'ve do memorized many dialogue and songs.
>>>I\'ve to memorize many dialogues and songs.
At that time very trembled, but I have very interested in that musical.
>>>That time was very trembling, but I was very interested in that musical.
I\'ve do one best.
>>> I\'ve done my best.
I\'ve don\'t forgot it, that day.
>>>I will not forget that day.
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